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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

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In the modern ,era
people
 are not getting sufficient time for leisure
activities
.Many
people
 try to
balance
 work and other
activities
 in their life.Even though it is very difficult to manage.Whether
this
 activity requires any restrictions needs to be analysed.There could be several
problems
 with
this
.In the ensuing ,
paragarphs
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paragraphs
 I will scrupulously analyse the
problems
 and possible solutions for
this
 statement. On the one hand, there are several
problems
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in
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 work-life
balance
 and other parts of
activities
. Commencing with
problems
firstly
 lack of self-care.To elucidate,prioritize self-care
activities
 like exercise, meditation, or hobbies. Taking care of your physical and mental health is essential for maintaining
balance
.
Moreover
, the second problem is
a
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mental health issues which we face feeling depressed and
feeling
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anxious or worried.A recent new report published by 'Times of India' revealed the fact that in India
people
 who work in different categories do not get enough time to be involved in other
activities
 and families, which exemplifies
this
. In order to solve
this
 serious issue, some measures can be taken
firstly
,set boundaries.To explain Avoid overworking or bringing work-related tasks home.
This
 helps create a clear separation between work and personal life,
although
 the company should provide enough leave to time spend with their family.
In addition
, provide a public awareness campaign.To illustrate,companies should promote awareness classes so that the individual can understand and learn about a better life and meditation
.
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Furthermore
furthermore
,communication open and honest communication with your employer, family, and friends is crucial. Discuss your needs and constraints to ensure understanding and support. In conclusion, achieving a perfect work-life
balance
 is often harder, and it may vary from person to person, the better
balance
 has not
get
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people
 nowadays.
However
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 we can solve
this
 issue through public awareness classes and boundaries with companies. My
apprehention
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appreciation
 should be considered and not warranted.
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