In many countries television shows many foreign -made programmes. The dominance to the imported entertainment is harmful to the culture of these countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Entertainment has now taken over the world since it has

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a good resource to relieve

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and anxiety that

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faced

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in our everyday

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. Many

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that foreign-made programmes are great learning

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for one because they provide wider exposure.

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, other locals believe that imported entertainment can cause harm to

culture

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the culture

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of the country. I, personally, think that there is no harm in foreign shows being telecasted in the country. Foreign countries are known for their

technoligical

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technological

advancements and for their mindsets for progress. The shows

contains

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knowledge that can benefit young minds of other countries. They can

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be a great of enjoyment

while

inspiring

young

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generation to enhance their skill sets. For

intance

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instance

, a

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show

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nicklodean named, Victorious was popular among

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college students all around the world since

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showed not only funny content but

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that kids

besides

their acadeics were

also

invloved

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involved

in singing and dancing activities which inspired children

of

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different countries

to

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also

enhance these skills of their.

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, it can

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be not denied that telecasting foreign shows can be one of the

reason

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for forgetting

cultural

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the cultural

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values of a country since children learn and do things

what

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that

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they see.

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in Pakistan, relationships before marriage are nowadays very common which are not acceptable by desi parents and relatives since it was never a part of Pakistani culture because of religious concerns, but the foreign shows promoted these among the youth of Pakistan. In conclusion, despite respecting the religious views of all

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, I am in

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of

freign-made

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free-made

programmes since the

adantages

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advantages

of having these programmes outweigh the disadvantages.