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The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
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The table compares the
number of
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five different kinds of
vehicles
 that were registered in Australia in three different years, 2010, 2012,
2014
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and 2014
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.
Overall
, all types of five
vehicles
 registered saw an upward trend over the period shown.
While
 the figure for passenger
vehicles
 was the highest, motorcycles had the most dramatic rise. In 2020, 11.8
million
of
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passenger
vehicles
 were registered in Australia, followed by that of
the
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commercial ones, which was significantly lower at only 2.3
million
. Over the period of four years, the number of passenger
vehicles
 registered rose by 10.2% to 13
million
,
whereas
 there were only 0.4
million
 more
of
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the
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commercial
vehicles
 registered,
the
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 rise of
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million
. Turning to the remaining type of
vehicles
, the greatest increase was recorded for motorcycles, which grew from 540,000 registered at the beginning of the table to 709,000 registered in 2014, a rise of 30.8%. During the same period, heavy trucks and light trucks witnessed an increase of 8.3% and 23.5%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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