The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
The given table has been divided into three columns each of which
represnts
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represents
some information regarding the
amount
of money in 5 different
countires
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countries
. The data given
are concerning
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the expenditure of food/drinks/
tobacoo
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tobacco
clothing/footwear and leisure/
education
in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey. A glance at the table provided reveals that the parts which were mostly paid for were by far food, beverage and tobacco
whereas
people
in these five countries paid a negligible
amount
on
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for
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entertainment and
education
./ The expenditure on entertainment and
education
fell short of the other sectors . The highest
amount
of money spent
one
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on
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F
/D/T was by Turkish
people
followed by Irish
people
accounting for roughly %29 which was far higher than the amounts in these two countries paid for clothing and footwear. In Ireland , only %6.43 of spending was related to C/
F
, almost the same
amount
spent in Turkey and Spain on these items. The spending on clothing/footwear in Italy was almost half of the money on
F
/D/T (approximately %17) . Swedish
people
spent three times more on
F
/D/T when compared with C/
F
( %5.40) and
this
amount
dropped to %3.22 for Leisure/
Education
that
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which
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was equal to the
amount
paid by Italian
people
in
this
field. The
least
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lowest
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rate of spending on L/E belonged to Spain with less than %2.
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