Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for student’s home country. What extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays studying abroad has emerged as a popular trend. Some believe that there are several benefits of studying abroad for a pupil’s hometown. I would totally agree with
this
assertion and the explanation will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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Firstly
, since the world today has become more globalized, many Linking Words
countries
have been developed. Use synonyms
However
undeveloped societies have been Linking Words
cope
with the scarcity of know-how in terms of Change the verb form
coping
coped
nation’s
development and lack of Correct article usage
the nation’s
some
intellect. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Thus
, studying in developed Linking Words
countries
has a positive impact on the enhancement in pupil’s Use synonyms
home
nations. Use synonyms
As a result
, Linking Words
students
receiving new skills can use their abilities Use synonyms
for developing
their town. Change preposition
to develop
For instance
, those Linking Words
students
who sit in political positions Use synonyms
resulting
in developing their Wrong verb form
result
home
Use synonyms
country
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, studying in a developed Linking Words
country
can open the minds of Use synonyms
students
because Use synonyms
students
have a connection Use synonyms
between
people from different nations. Change preposition
with
Moreover
, they have more chances to get a better job after graduation than those who study in developing Linking Words
countries
. Use synonyms
For example
, in Thailand Linking Words
students
who graduated from Use synonyms
western
Capitalize word
Western
countries
always get a Use synonyms
high ranking
position in famous organizations. Add a hyphen
high-ranking
Although
sometimes brain drain happens because Linking Words
the
standard of living conditions compared to the native Change preposition
of the
country
, they can bring to their homeland a lot of money by earning in foreign Use synonyms
countries
which in turn Use synonyms
bring
a profound impact on Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
Use synonyms
countries
Change noun form
the country's
economical
growth.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree that studying abroad can provide huge virtues for a student’s Replace the word
economic
home
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country
in many aspects. They can ultimately benefit their Use synonyms
home
Use synonyms
countries
by making use of their newly acquired knowledge and skills to earn well and become pivotal in the development of their Use synonyms
country
.Use synonyms
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