Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behavior). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The reward system has been practised since early childhood which encourages a child to do more and better ,

especiall

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especially

in

school

.

This

acts as a driving force for them to be the best they can be. Some pupils who excel academically have been rewarded by some universities

while

others believe that students who do well in extracurricular

activities

should receive more recognition. On one hand, there are people who are more focused on their studies theoretically where they are always at the top of the class or have good grades.

Moreover

, for them,

this

area gives them a sense of self-fulfilment and confidence.

For instance

, if they are really

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in content, they have enough knowledge to whatever the question or task is given to them. So, it will be easy for them and do the task on time.

Hence

, doing the task on time gives them a chance to be recognised and given credit for it.

In addition

, the more they do good in all subjects,

then

the more rewards they can receive which acts as a convincing power for them to achieve more.

On the other hand

, there are students who are really best at sports, music and good behaviour which schools cannot deny to praise these children for their hard work and perseverance. Some really love and enjoy outdoor

activities

aside from reading books and studying.

Furthermore

, the

school

become their playground too. It is where they learn and play at the same time.

For example

, there are

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of organizations that offer sports

activities

or groups that a child can join and be able to enhance his or her skills

while

studying.

Nevertheless

, if they succeed in their chosen pathways, the reputation of the

school

will be astounding and will offer them rewards. In my own perspective, both areas

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or extra-curricular achievements should be given importance as these are crucial

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good

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education.

Thus

, they can have

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to mould a person to become a well-rounded individual as long as the balance between studies and

school

activities

is maintained.

To sum up

, the

school

offers a lot of opportunities to every learner not only inside the classroom but in its environment as well.

That is

why most universities have ballfields or other facilities to motivate each one of them to engage in physical

activities

aside from the four walls of a room.

In addition

, it

also

develops their social skills and teaches them to have a balanced lifestyle.

Hence

, every aspect should be recognised and awards should be given if they excel especially in both.