You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite a close friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house.

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Dear Jimmy, I hope you have been doing well since we

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saw each other. I moved to my new house

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week. I feel gorgeous that I have my home even if it's

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. My new furniture has arrived recently.

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, I am ready to invite you here. Do you have any plans for next weekend? I would be so happy if you came. I will prepare a special dinner for us,

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we can watch the horror movie which was launched recently. I have a lot to talk with you about my boss and my workmates. I have guess room so you can stay at night. We can have breakfast on Saturday morning in my garden. My house is semi-detached and it has its own small garden. It has two en-suite bedrooms, a working room, a kitchen and a living room. I hope you may feel as comfortable as your home. I am so excited that you will be my first guest at my new house. I am waiting for your call. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Cheers, Jane Fonda

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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