You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

Hello Mam, Hope! You are doing great, I am Navdeep, a former student of standard 10th. I recently got a chance to go to the school. I and my friend were looking for you and we heard about your retirement. That you were not entitled yet, but
due to
your health consequences you had to take
decision. I hope you are better soon. I still remember some of the life lessons that were taught during my studies. And I cannot forget how have you contributed to my life not only by giving lectures but
concrete ways to live a healthy life. Today, whatever I have, it's only because of you mam. You saw a child sitting at the back and found me alone even though the class was full. It was you, who built my self-confidence and made me that now I can talk confidently with anyone. I really want to appreciate all those things that have been done by you. I will
try my best to walk on the path that was shown to me. Thank you for everything, Warm wishes, Nav
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