The graph below shows the amount of good transported in the UK.
This
report derives from the graph, which illustrates the number of products which are
transported by four different methods in the United Kingdom (UK) between 1974 and 2002.
A good starting point would be to say that, the freeway led the pack over the years shown, whilst the pipeline was the least. Wrong verb form
were
On the other hand
, every way which
used for transportation increased significantly except railways.
The first result worth pointing out is thatCorrect pronoun usage
apply
,
roads led the pack between with approximately 70 Remove the comma
apply
million
tonnes
and around 100 million
tonnes
in 1974 and 2002, respectively. The railway followed its placement with nearly 40 million
tonnes
in 1974, but in the next years
railway usage experienced a decrease. Add a comma
,years
As a result
, its placement was replaced by ships in 1978. In 2002, water way
was chosen for more than 600 Correct your spelling
waterway
million
tonnes
for transportation.
Another piece of information that can be observed is that,
the pipeline, which was used for transport of nearly 3 Remove the comma
apply
million
tonnes
, was not a popular choice in 1974. But in the following years, it increased rapidly,
and finished the competition with over 20 Remove the comma
apply
million
tonnes
in 2002. Moreover
, railways transported more than 40 million
tonnes
in 2002.Submitted by barisberkay97 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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