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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Certain individuals want to do their
school
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projects
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groups
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while
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 others prefer to do them alone. In my opinion,
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, there are a few advantages
for
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 the latter one, the former choice provides multiple important aspects required for the
students
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. The main benefit of working alone on
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projects
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 is
independency
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 in the task execution.To explain,
students
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 who
work
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 solely can execute the tasks
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 their wish and
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 will have the visibility of the complete
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. Moving
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, children will not suffer any communication issues as they
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 single-handed on the
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.
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, a study conducted in India revealed that
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 who
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 alone on a
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 had a greater capability of explaining things in better quality compared to those who
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 in
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 there are benefits in
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 case, the skill
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 required for the student's future is not available.
Students
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 who
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 in a group on
school
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projects
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 will have several benefits.
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, their teamwork skills will be enhanced during
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 time because all the people in the team
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 together to achieve a single goal which is to complete the
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.
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, there is a possibility of knowledge transfer which can happen among the
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 in a cluster.
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 is because each student may have a strong knowledge area
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this
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 area may be weak for someone in the group.
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 they can benefit each other in growing their intellectual skills.
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, a report published by an IT company disclosed that the team management skills of
an
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employer
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 who worked in
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 on
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school
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a school
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project
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was
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 higher compared to others. It is,
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, better to
work
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 in
groups
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 on
school
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projects
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.
To conclude
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, a few people wanted to
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 in a group on
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projects
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while
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 many others wanted to
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 alone. There are advantages in both cases .
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, I believe that working in
a
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groups
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 on
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project
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 has a greater benefit which are mandatorily required for the
students
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.
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