Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and renovations of historic

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. Others believe that

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will be spent on new public

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. I believe that investing public resources in the

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of existing

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can be the better option. Some of my reasons will be explored in the remainder of

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. Some

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are part of the history and identity of people.

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, worldwide it is possible to find different

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associated with relevant historical events. What is more, many of these are used today as museums or cultural centers to illustrate, the Zocalo in Mexico City is a complex of historical

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and it is nowadays still used as a cultural and political meeting center. Clearly,

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associated with the roots of citizens should be conserved and for

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proposed need of invest

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from governments. Another important point in

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of the

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of old

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is the economy.

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with, tourists travel worldwide in order to visit important

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and museums

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, the tourism industry moves thousands of millions of dollars per year and for some

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is the source of important income.

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, hundreds of people travel every year to the Yucatan Peninsula in the south of Mexico to visit the ancient ruins and museums. So, investing

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in

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and renovation can be beneficial to the economy of countries and regions. In conclusion, I admit that spending public

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on creating new public

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can contribute to urban development, but, renovation and

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of existing ones should be a priority.