A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

Dear Pat, I hope you're doing great. How was the New Year party you attended
last
week? Was it fun? How was the restaurant and the food?
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I am asking you
this
because I'm planning for my birthday party. Do you remember my b'
day
? I know you have short memory and can't remember dates. By the way, my birthday is on January 4th , that's next week.
This
b'
day
I'm throwing a party in the same restaurant, you went to
last
week. What is the name of the restaurant? Is it the same food place which is newly opened near our old school? If yes,
then
it's very convenient for us
otherwise
I need your mapping skills that
day
.
Also
, I have heard that they have a variety of food options, do they? Can you suggest me some dishes that
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can order for my birthday evening? Do they assist in decorating and cake-cutting ceremonies? Let's meet and rock the
day
. Best Regards, Manu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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