Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children , while other people disagree for number of reasons . Consider both side of this debate and reach a conclusion .
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education
schools
are best for children
however
some people thinks
that Change the verb form
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it is
the
good option for them. Correct article usage
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This
essay will further
elaborate both perspective
before offering my own opinion on Change to a plural noun
perspectives
this
matter.
To commence with , Convent schools
offers
a plethora of advantages to students. First and foremost is quality Correct subject-verb agreement
offer
eduaction
. Boarding Correct your spelling
education
schools
provides
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provide
structured
environment to Add an article
a structured
children
which will eventually develop discipline, time
management as well
as
strong work ethics. Correct word choice
and
Secondly
, Living inMilitary
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in military
schools
saves a huge amount of time
of
pupils. If students don't have to travel from home to Change preposition
for
school
it saves their
plenty of Correct pronoun usage
them
time
and they can devote their selves to study
more and Wrong verb form
studying
get
good grades Wrong verb form
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in
exams. Another point is that it brings diverse Change preposition
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experience
school
children
come to study from various backgroud
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background
backgrounds
Hence
, it will broaden children
's perspective and mind however
good always comes with bad.
Neverthless
, military Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
schools
has
some drawbacks too. Change the verb form
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To begin
with, the most significant disadvanage
is Correct your spelling
disadvantage
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the sepration
sepration
of family. Correct your spelling
separation
Children
often miss their family
whilst in boarding Fix the agreement mistake
families
schools
and feel isolated. Furthermore
, pupils feel less connected to their parent
after spending so much Fix the agreement mistake
parents
time
in military schools
. For example
, Children
sometime
feel that Replace the word
sometimes
his
parentsCorrect pronoun usage
their
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did
him
as Correct pronoun usage
them
his
friends. Correct pronoun usage
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Moreover
, pupills
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pupils
feels
pressure and stress as convent Change the verb form
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school
always
more Add a missing verb
are always
focus
on studies and Replace the word
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adademic
results rather than Correct your spelling
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extracuricular
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extracurricular
extra-curricular
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, therefore,
therefore
student take
too much stress about their grades and it will eventually affect their mental health. Not only Change the verb form
takes
this
but they have limited freedom as they can not go to play games according
their Add the preposition
toaccording
wills
but Fix the agreement mistake
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school
decides that. Correct article usage
the school
Also
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,Also
this
type of school
's financial cost is higher than normal one.
To summarise, all the points aforementioned above some people think that convent schools
is
the best choice for child Change the verb form
are
whereas
some believe that its
not Replace the word
it's
it is
a
best option for Change the article
the
child
for numerous reason. I strongly agree with the Add an article
a child
the child
later
argument as Correct your spelling
latter
children
often feel lonely and stressed at boarding schools
therefore
military schools
are not best
optionAdd an article
the best
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