The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

#floor #plan #library #years

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shows

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the differences between

two

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timelines of

central

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library

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. The timelines

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years

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ago and

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time.

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, 20

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back the entrance was decorated with tables and chairs.

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if you see the reception now there is no furniture. Back

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the

children

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room

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was different from the gaming

room

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currently

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there is no gaming

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and

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storytelling stage is made for kids with

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arrangement of fiction books. It is

also

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noticiable

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noticeable

that in the past there was no lecture

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, but there is an arrangement of lecture

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room

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. Twenty

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back

adult's

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book section was divided into two parts;

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this

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time adult corner includes

information

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desk

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and

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machines. In the past, there was no cafeteria in the

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, but now there is a cafe.

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, there is

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computer

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just close to

entrance

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the entrance

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for the

library

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user.

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, The floor plan of a public

library

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now changed a lot

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twenty

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years, room with synonyms.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
layout
shelving
reading area
reference section
encyclopedias
dictionaries
circulation desk
transactions
digital media
computer stations
multimedia rooms
café area
social environment
leisure-friendly
expanded reading areas
user experience
comfortable seating
children's section
engage younger readers

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

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Some believe that technology, such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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