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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
waste
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 in
tonnes
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 that three companies, named A,
B
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, and C emitted from 2000 to 2015.
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, it is noteworthy that A and
B
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 showed their downtrends in
waste
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while
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 C produced more
waste
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overtime
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. Another point worth highlighting is that A led the first place most of the time in
produced-
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produced waste
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waste
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. Regarding A and
B
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 company, the former stood at the highest amount of 12
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 in 2000, which was followed by the latter with about 4
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 of trash lower.
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,
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company A witnessed a gradual drop
whereas
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firm
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B
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peaked at about 10
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 in 2010 before it fell sharply later on. In 2015, roughly 8
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 of
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 was recorded at
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firm
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 A, in the
mean time
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meantime
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, only 3
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 of
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 was produced at
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firm
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B
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. On
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,
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firm
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 C reported about 4
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 in 2000, surpassed
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the
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company
B
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 and A in the next 15 years, and rose significantly to
estimately
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estimated
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 10
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 in 2015, which was the highest amount compared to the others.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tonnes, b, firm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • peak
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • intersect
  • consistent
  • tonnes
  • measurement
  • compare
  • contrast
  • period
  • analytical
  • overview
  • summarize
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