Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. discuss both views and give your opinion

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many

competition

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.

While

other

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argue that

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improvement for

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essay, I will discuss both views. Winning in the

sport

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competition

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the school

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school

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reputation and pride.

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student is encouraged by

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to win in

sport

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competition

. It may be because of that

school

already has achieved thropy in yearly. They obsess in order to win in the

competition

again.

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,

sport

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teacher

play

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a key role

to maintain

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student ability to

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a winner. They have to address a

strategy

such

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self-motivation and agile to solve their own problem. Learning in a formal education is open wide range in order to solve

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a certain situation. Most

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prefer to

do working

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together with

their friend to solve a problem. Sharing knowledge between

student

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is important to gain more experience to win in some

of

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apply

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competition

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competitions

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rather than compete

each

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other.

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, the

children

is

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encouraged by

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a teacher

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to work together in order to win in soccer

competition

. Indeed, it is difficult

if

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soccer

player

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players

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doing

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it

self

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. Doing

discussion

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with their team,

it

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should be

opportunity

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an opportunity

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to improve their

strategy

to win in a

competition

.

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obsess

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in

sport

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competition

would develop

reputation

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and pride of

school

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the school

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.

Children

must

able

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to fulfill any

strategy

to win in the

competition

such

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otherhand

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sport

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competition

need teamwork. They

are encourage

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are encouraged

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to share their experience to develop

strategy

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strategies

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with their friend. It is better to win in the

sport

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competition

by working together.