Some people think that success is mainly measured by how much money a person has. To what extent do you agree?
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economic situation leads individuals to be more functional and make more Add an article
The global
money
for a living. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
people
may consider Use synonyms
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the amounts
amounts
of wealth as an important factor for Fix the agreement mistake
amount
being
Unnecessary verb
apply
succeed
. Replace the word
success
Although
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this
attitude could be accurate somehow, I believe that there Linking Words
are
more than one cause to call a Change the verb form
is
person
"successful".
Nowadays, Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
are tend
to make Change the verb form
tend
money
to improve their Use synonyms
wellbeing
. Correct your spelling
well-being
Following
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this
, large amounts of income could provide more opportunities for a Linking Words
person
to benefit from Use synonyms
healthier
body and mind. But Correct article usage
a healthier
people
with low earnings can endeavour to build a superior Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
For instance
, physical exercises Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
briskly
walking, running Change the word
brisk
and
etc. are free and they cause Correct word choice
apply
increasing
the amounts of Dopamine in Wrong verb form
an increase in
brain
that prevent mind and body illnesses. Add an article
the brain
Hence
, Linking Words
achieve
health, itself, is an important goal for humans and it is Wrong verb form
achieving
also
possible for poor Linking Words
people
to reach that and find a sense of Use synonyms
fulfillment
and Change the spelling
fulfilment
success
in their lives.
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
relationship
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relationships
is one
another Verb problem
are
factors
of Fix the agreement mistake
factor
success
which Use synonyms
people
are concerned about Use synonyms
it
more than Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
. Many Use synonyms
people
who have established successful companies and now they are rich, suffer from Use synonyms
lack
of close-knit relationships in their lives. Correct article usage
a lack
For example
, a wealthy Linking Words
person
needs an urgent surgery, he or she probably chooses the most professional Use synonyms
surgent
and hospital but maybe Correct your spelling
surgery
this
Linking Words
person
spends the recovery period alone because he or she hasn't any close friends to ask them Use synonyms
aid
. Being in a friendly Change preposition
for aid
relations
with Replace the word
relationship
people
is satisfactory Use synonyms
due to
human being social and emotional needs. Linking Words
As a result
, having strong relationships is one of the keys to Linking Words
be
successful in Wrong verb form
being
life
and it doesn't depend on how much Use synonyms
money
you have but it Use synonyms
rely
on social skills.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
relies
economy
has Add an article
the economy
had
considerably changed Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
people
attitudes towards Change noun form
people's
life
and Use synonyms
success
. A significant amount of individuals think Use synonyms
money
is the most necessary aspect of their Use synonyms
wellbeing
and they evaluate themselves and others by Correct your spelling
well-being
range
of wealth. Add an article
a range
the range
Whereas
,I believe Linking Words
success
has different meanings to anyone. So, Use synonyms
people
may concentrate on other sides of Use synonyms
life
and develop themselves in those ways to feel successful.Use synonyms
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