Some people think that success is mainly measured by how much money a person has. To what extent do you agree?
Global
economic situation leads individuals to be more functional and make more Add an article
The global
money
for a living. Thus
, people
may consider Correct article usage
the amounts
amounts
of wealth as an important factor for Fix the agreement mistake
amount
being
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apply
succeed
. Replace the word
success
Although
this
attitude could be accurate somehow, I believe that there are
more than one cause to call a Change the verb form
is
person
"successful".
Nowadays, people
are tend
to make Change the verb form
tend
money
to improve their wellbeing
. Correct your spelling
well-being
Following
this
, large amounts of income could provide more opportunities for a person
to benefit from healthier
body and mind. But Correct article usage
a healthier
people
with low earnings can endeavour to build a superior life
. For instance
, physical exercises such
as briskly
walking, running Change the word
brisk
and
etc. are free and they cause Correct word choice
apply
increasing
the amounts of Dopamine in Wrong verb form
an increase in
brain
that prevent mind and body illnesses. Add an article
the brain
Hence
, achieve
health, itself, is an important goal for humans and it is Wrong verb form
achieving
also
possible for poor people
to reach that and find a sense of fulfillment
and Change the spelling
fulfilment
success
in their lives.
Furthermore
, relationship
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relationships
is one
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are
factors
of Fix the agreement mistake
factor
success
which people
are concerned about it
more than Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
. Many people
who have established successful companies and now they are rich, suffer from lack
of close-knit relationships in their lives. Correct article usage
a lack
For example
, a wealthy person
needs an urgent surgery, he or she probably chooses the most professional surgent
and hospital but maybe Correct your spelling
surgery
this
person
spends the recovery period alone because he or she hasn't any close friends to ask them aid
. Being in a friendly Change preposition
for aid
relations
with Replace the word
relationship
people
is satisfactory due to
human being social and emotional needs. As a result
, having strong relationships is one of the keys to be
successful in Wrong verb form
being
life
and it doesn't depend on how much money
you have but it rely
on social skills.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
relies
economy
has Add an article
the economy
had
considerably changed Unnecessary verb
apply
people
attitudes towards Change noun form
people's
life
and success
. A significant amount of individuals think money
is the most necessary aspect of their wellbeing
and they evaluate themselves and others by Correct your spelling
well-being
range
of wealth. Add an article
a range
the range
Whereas
,I believe success
has different meanings to anyone. So, people
may concentrate on other sides of life
and develop themselves in those ways to feel successful.Submitted by nikimohamadi72 on
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