The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON

The map below shows 2 possible sites (S1 and S2) of a new super market planned for the town of GARLSDON
The map displays a new plan for a supermarket in the
town
of Garlsdon.
Overall
, it shows change in the main roads and railway tracks
due to
an increase in
population
.
To begin
, the supermarket is located at the heart of the
town
. It has a lot of transportation facilities for commuters. The railway track was built from the north-east to the south-west. The track went across the
town
which is placed next to the main road. The
town
contains three main roads for traveller's convenience in the city. The supermarket does not have a traffic zone. The tracks are not disturbing the active main roads.
Moreover
, looking at
this
map shows numerous
population
lists in all three directions
such
as
,
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the
north-east
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northeast
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,
south-east
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southeast
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and southwest. The
population
is increasing in the particular
town
.
Firstly
, the north-east with a
population
of 10,000, the road belongs 12 kilometres to Hindon. The next one is 16 kilometres with a growth of 15,000 people in Bransdon.
In addition
, the same
the
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way has expanded to 25 kilometres to Cransdon with 29,000 people who live here. The housing area is built in the North and south. The industrial zone occupies the highest amount of land, more than the housing area.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • site selection
  • supermarket
  • residential areas
  • main roads
  • public transport
  • traffic congestion
  • peak shopping hours
  • parking availability
  • suppliers
  • delivery logistics
  • amenities
  • shopper convenience
  • environmental implications
  • green spaces
  • urban development
  • economic development
  • job creation
  • local businesses
  • market saturation
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