Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree

There is a saying that goes like "
One
pen,
one
book,
one
teacher and
one
school shapes the student'sstudent's life". Each and every
person
on
this
planet is encouraged to have a basic education so that he becomes a responsible citizen of the country going
further
. And
this
can be achieved right from a young age in schools. I agree with the above context saying that disruptive
students
have a negative influence on others. I think it is true. The actions of
one
person
can surely influence others as well until and unless the
person
who is getting affected is well aware of what he is doing. If it is
otherwise
he will be misled and go on to become
one
of them. For ,instance
students
at a very young age will be exposed to different sorts of things through social media, movies and even the environment
also
plays a big role. There was a boy at our school who happened to roam with people who were much older than him and he got into bad habits. His way of approach changed as he spent more time with them. Started to act rude, impolite and irresponsible.
This
also
influenced the
students
who were his friends from school. Being macho, loud and rude was kind of fun is what they had thought and tried to be
one
. But in ,reality it is not. For sure
students
who are noisy and disobedient have to be taken care of in the schools. ,
Initially
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they have to make them understand that the way they have chosen is whether right or wrong. Handle them with patience and in the right manner. If
this
doesn't work out they have to be filtered from the others and should be guided separately. It is a difficult task but in the long ,run they will realize the importance of being a disruptive student is not an ideal thing to lead a good life. So
overall
I would like to say that every
person
has to enjoy life so much so that the
person
will be well aware of his limits and be a responsible citizen for his country.
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