The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The data illustrates the number of
households
in the USA by their profits in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
. We can notice that the least number of
households
are people with incomes of about 75.000–100.000 dollars, and over
this
period of time, the numbers of
households
with
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profit
50–45 thousand dollars were not changed.
For example
, in 2007, most of the
households
with income over
were
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$100.000,
while
people with
protit
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profit
starts from 75 to 100 thousand dollars were two times less than
the
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most. And
this
situation remained unchanged for 8 years.
However
, the number of
famely
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family
with income less than $25,000 increased over
this
time, from 25
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,
then
28
mil
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mils
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, and
then
27
mil
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, respectively.
Further
, the situation with 25–50 thousand per year income
famelyes's
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family's
numbers is similar to previous group. The only difference is that all numbers
in
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every year increased by about 10
percent
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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