Nowadays celebrities earn more money than policitans. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
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increased
celebrities
receiving more Use synonyms
money
which has more advantages. Use synonyms
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actors
people
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adults
and he is paid Correct word choice
and adults
huge
salary when he finishes filming a movie or doing a commercial. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
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into the industry because they can earn more Correct your spelling
resources
money
than other professions. Use synonyms
For example
, every year many famous Linking Words
people
appear on social networking platforms like Use synonyms
tiktok
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TikTok
youtube
or Correct your spelling
YouTube
facebook
.
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On the other hand
, the fact that politicians earn less than famous Linking Words
people
causes many Use synonyms
problem
like they feel it is not worth the effort Change to a plural noun
problems
thay
put in because they have to Correct your spelling
they
commnicate
with presidents of other countries or Correct your spelling
communicate
in other words
they are the face of the country that Linking Words
benefit
the nation Change the verb form
benefits
while
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celebrities
only bring personal profits that makes them unmotivated to do Use synonyms
thier
job well. Correct your spelling
their
Besides
that, Linking Words
policitians
see that inadequacy will give rise to corruption or sell the secret of the nation. Correct your spelling
politicians
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policitians
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politicians
money
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which
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in which
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a
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apply
they
want to steal the nation’s Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
.
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although
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people
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money
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but
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more Use synonyms
policitians
which has more disadvantages.Correct your spelling
politicians
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