Nowadays celebrities earn more money than policitans. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In
recents
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recent
years, the increase in entertainment demand
leads
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has led
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to the appearance of many
celebrities
and the amount of
money
they
are received
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also
increases
while
politicians
are earned
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earn
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less.
Although
it offers many career options, it is
negative
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a negative
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development. On the one hand,
increasesed
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increased
demand for entertainment leads to
celebrities
receiving more
money
which has more advantages.
The
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first,
it helps entertainment stars feel appreciated and gain a lot of reputation.
For instance
, Dwayne Jonhson, who is one of the most famous
Hollywood’s
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Hollywood
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actor
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actors
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, most
people
around the world know him including children,
adults
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and adults
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and he is paid
huge
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a huge
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salary when he finishes filming a movie or doing a commercial.
Furthermore
, it can attract big human
resoures
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resources
into the industry because they can earn more
money
than other professions.
For example
, every year many famous
people
appear on social networking platforms like
tiktok
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TikTok
,
youtube
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YouTube
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or
facebook
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.
On the other hand
, the fact that politicians earn less than famous
people
causes many
problem
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problems
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like they feel it is not worth the effort
thay
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they
put in because they have to
commnicate
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communicate
with presidents of other countries or
in other words
they are the face of the country that
benefit
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benefits
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the nation
while
celebrities
only bring personal profits that makes them unmotivated to do
thier
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their
job well.
Besides
that,
policitians
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politicians
see that inadequacy will give rise to corruption or sell the secret of the nation.
For example
, if
policitians
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politicians
see a balance of
money
which
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in which
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celebrities
earn more than them, they will create
a
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apply
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corruption and
they
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apply
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want to steal the nation’s
money
. In conclusion,
although
the fact that famous
people
can earn more
money
has many advantages
but
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when they earn more
money
more
policitians
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politicians
which has more disadvantages.
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