Child labour is considered to be one of the most serious problems ob the planet. What are the reasons why children find themselves in child labour and can be done to tackle this issue ?

Child
labour
have
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become an big
issues
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for every
nations
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nation
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. The main reason is
porty
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poverty
in every
nations
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nation
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.
Child
labour
is
great
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a great
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problem
in every country.
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, Nowadays,
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children are working more and more to earn.
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Businessman
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are give
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are given
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work
to
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children
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child
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children
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because they think they can
work
more but it harmful
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for
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to
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the
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development.
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, if a
child
will go
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to
work
then
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and then
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going
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to school
then
it will affect
on
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the growth of
country
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the country
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.
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,
public
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the public
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should support the laws which are made against
child
labour
.
Planet
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is facing
an
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a
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great
problem
in
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with
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child
labour
. The government should spread awareness about the importance. Rich
people
should help poor
people
to get knowledge. For the development of
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a nation
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nation
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,nation
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education is very
much
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important
as well as
play
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an
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great role.
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,
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are
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so many
reason
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reasons
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why children find themselves in
child
labour
because of
provty
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poverty
, knowledge, background and much more.
This
problem
can
be solve
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be solved
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by making new
rule
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rules
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for children.
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, if a
child
will go
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to school that
in
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apply
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nation
will get
so
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many benefits and even kid will
also
help
in
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with
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income.
However
, the government should make a rule that
person
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people
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above 25 have to
work
. The government should provide free education to poor
people
so it can help in
child
labour
.
Thirdly
, Poor
people
send
there
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their
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child
to
work
for
the
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their
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income which
affect
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affects
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the
nation
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nation's
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growth.
To conclude
, the
about
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information describes the
problem
on the planet
due to
child
labour
.
By making
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new
rule
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rules
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it can be helpful to
nation
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the nation
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.
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