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Some people think that Modern Technology is making people more sensible, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both points and give your opinion

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In the present day, technologies are everywhere around you from toothbrushes to transportation.It is becoming part of our life. In
this
 essay, I will explain two sides of
people
's thoughts. A few
people
 said that technology in the present day improves knowledge if you use it correctly ,
while
 someone
also
 said it deteriorates society from human to human. As it could have both advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly
, the internet is one of the well-known innovations. Most
people
 around the world can access the internet, so it is possible to learn something through mobile or laptop
instead
 of books in a library. There are several websites or platforms for you to choose from for learning.
In addition
, you might get new information on the internet by accident but it might be good knowledge in the future.
On the other hand
, someone could say that it would bring everyone out from each other. You can see numerous
people
 use their phones most of the time. It is becoming one of the organs in human bodies. In some moments, they forget about a person in front of them, and even if they do not do it on purpose it could happen plenty of times.
To sum up
, there are new technologies every single day,
for example
, Chatgpt or robots. We have talked about both sides, as it could help
people
 to learn new things, but
also
 could make the social between
people
 get worse. It has both benefits and drawbacks, so controlling yourself is the main point.
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