The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The charts provide information on four factors that contributed to decreasing agricultural land productivity
along with
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the affected areas (North America, Europe, and
Oceania
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) in the 1990s.
Overall
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, land degradation was dominantly caused by over-grazing,
deforestation
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and over-cultivation,
while
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salinization accounted for a small proportion.
In addition
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, Europe was the most affected area, followed by
Oceania
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and North America most of which happened because of
deforestation
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, excluding
Oceania
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. Regarding the effect of land degradation, Europe has affected just over 20% which consists of 5.6% of over-grazing and 7.7% of
deforestation
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.
However
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, the largest proportion was
deforestation
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, reaching 8.4% which made
this
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factor in the top position than other areas.
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, North America was the least affected area which just accounting for less than 10%. Those three indicators just made up less than 3%, except over-grazing which accounts for 1.5%.
In contrast
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, the over-grazing in
Oceania
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stood at around 15% which was caused by 10.8% over-grazing, followed by 1% over-cultivation and 1.8%
deforestation
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oceania, deforestation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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