You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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How are you doing? It's been a long to met you. I was not able to write a letter to you because of my busy schedule with work

as well as

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studies. Today, I am writing to inform you that I will be in New York near your house on my summer vacation.

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with, my manager provided me with a free family tour trip to New York without any cost because of my dedication and attendance. Afterwards, my family booked an apartment outside of the city named Albany to relax without any daily interruption. The condo has a personal balcony and a jacuzzi.

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, there is a small lake in front of the home which is followed by the forest to go hiking. I am excited after seeing

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breathtaking view in pictures. Apart from that, we are planning to spend our time efficiently.

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, it is kind of fun to go swimming and sunbathe after a long time.

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, on our second day, we can go hiking in the nearby forest.

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, we can go to see the night of New York as it is famous because of the lights and things

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as the liberty of the statue. I know it's hard for you because of your studies but could you please come to join us for a few days? It is been a long time since we talked, and had fun together. It will be in the second week of July and I am attaching all the details with

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letter. Let me know your plans. Hope to see you soon. Thanks Your's lovingly, Gurpinder Kaur

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

271 words

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You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

The Greeting

With the recent improvements to internet , people can leave views or opinions on goods or services they have purchased. Is it a good or a bad thing , discuss both giving your own answer with example.

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