The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate a public library at the present time versus how it used to be 20 years ago.
As an overview, the main factors that have been changed through
this
20-year period are the entrances of different sections. Most sections experienced a change in their contexts. Also
, Tables and chairs have been replaced by an information desk in a different area.
As it
can be observed, Correct pronoun usage
apply
instead
of the CDs, videos, and computer games section at the top left corner, this
central library has another section these days which contains sofas and children's fiction books
with a bigger space. However
, the entrance
remains as it was, the entrance
of the computer room, which used to be a reading room, wasn't near the entrance
20 years ago. Also
, the reference books
replace the adult fiction books
area between the two described sections.
On the other hand
, the Lecture room has taken the place of the Children's book place. While
Adult non-fiction books
have remained in front of this
section since 20 years ago, this
place also
shares its space with an information desk and some new self-service machines.Additionally
, these maps show a massive change at the right-down corner; there is a newly constructed cafe instead
of an enquiry desk which has an entrance
that is
at the left of the main entrance
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, entrance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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