You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there • invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

#house #lake #summer #friend #•describe #time #visit #dear………

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Dear Aman, Hope you find

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letter in your radiant spirit. How is everything going? As I told you I am planning to go somewhere for the summer vacation, I have been staying in a rented house. The best thing about

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is its location which is near a lake. Honestly, it looks like a Villa as it is very spacious. There are four rooms with attached bathrooms , a kitchen, lobby not only

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it has a swimming pool and a playroom which has various games to play.

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, there is not a single chance of getting bored. Every day I

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new activity.

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rafting in the lake,

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games like chess, and tennis in the house.

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, yesterday I and my family

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enjoyed a barbeque at night near the river. I am feeling on nine

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spending time at

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location. As your exams are going to be finished soon, I would like to invite you here to enjoy

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mesmerizing spot. We are still here for the next few days. At least for a few days have a visit here.You will definitely like

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. I will wait for your message. Yours lovingly, Jashandeep Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

204 words

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