You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there • invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Aman, Hope you find
this
letter in your radiant spirit. How is everything going? As I told you I am planning to go somewhere for the summer vacation, I have been staying in a rented house. The best thing about
this
is its location which is near a lake. Honestly, it looks like a Villa as it is very spacious. There are four rooms with attached bathrooms , a kitchen, lobby not only
this
it has a swimming pool and a playroom which has various games to play.
Therefore
, there is not a single chance of getting bored. Every day I
am trying
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a
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new activity.
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rafting in the lake,
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and
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games like chess, and tennis in the house.
Apart from
this
, yesterday I and my family
had
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enjoyed a barbeque at night near the river. I am feeling on nine
cloud
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while
spending time at
this
location. As your exams are going to be finished soon, I would like to invite you here to enjoy
this
mesmerizing spot. We are still here for the next few days. At least for a few days have a visit here.You will definitely like
this
. I will wait for your message. Yours lovingly, Jashandeep Kaur
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