Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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Developing the
economy
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is a priority for
countries
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worldwide and some believe
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impossible to achieve it with low environmental impact. In the remainder of
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essay, both points of view will be explored and a logical conclusion will be drawn
at the end
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. The development of the
economy
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for many
countries
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is related to the extraction of
mineral
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minerals
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or fossil
fuel
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fuels
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.
Firstly
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, the extraction of natural resource involves strong environmental impacts but history
show
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that
this
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is the
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quick
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way to become
in
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a rich country.
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, was a poor country that previously found oil in the 1950s and nowadays, there are strong levels of development. Clearly, the extraction of fossil fuels can boost the
economy
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of many
countries
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. On the other
hand
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some
countries
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try to
achieved
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prosperity through the
conservation
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of their natural capital.
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with, some governments making the decision to invest money in the
conservation
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of forests and jungles. What is more, there are expect that
this
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investment will boost the
economy
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. To illustrate, Costa Rica is the best
economy
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in Central America thanks to the
turist
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tourism
industry.
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was evolved around
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natural parks and the
conservation
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of flora and fauna. So, some cases show
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possible to get
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economy
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the economy
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grow
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and avoid environmental impact. In
conlusion
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conclusion
, I admit that for many
countries
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is
imposible
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impossible
to find
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a balanced
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balanced
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between
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economy
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development and
environment
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conservation
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