The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The chart below presents how many
magazines
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were sold per
person
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, between 2003, 2005, and 2007, in
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a total
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of five countries. We could say that eventually, in all
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five countries, the
number
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of
magazines
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sold decreased per
person
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in
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every year, except
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D.
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A sold 49
magazines
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in 2003, but decreased to 43 the next year, and
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dropped to 39 in 2007.
Country
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A had very most significant decrease among
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the five
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countries.
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B, similar to the pattern of
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A,
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had the highest
number
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of
magazines
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sold in 2003 with 50 copies, followed by a decreasing
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of 48 in 2005 and 43 exemplars in 2007. With 37 copies sold,
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C marked its highest magazine sold in 2003 per
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but decreased to 35 in 2005 and again, it declined in 2007 to only 32 pieces. The only exception,
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was
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D, which started its selling with only 19
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per
person
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in 2003, followed by an increase to 20 amounts in 2005 per
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, and rose to 25
magazines
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per
person
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in 2007.
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E had the least
number
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of
magazines
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sold per
person
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. They started with only an average of 5 numbers in 2003, increased just a little by 6 pieces, but dropped back to 5 average per
person
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in 2007. In conclusion, the trend showed a reduction in each
country
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from 2003 to 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, person, number, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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