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Summarize the changes in an airport between 1970 and today

The maps show how an
airport
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 has changed over the past few decades we can see that extensive changes have taken place, expanding and improving the
airport
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 facilities so that many more passengers can use it. Looking first at the situation in 1980, we can see that there were two terminals and runways in the South East of the site, joined by access roads and taxi things,
however
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, terminal 1 was very small and only Terminal 2 was large enough to handle a substantial number of passengers, there was a one control tower in the South.
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, the
airport
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 has changed dramatically, today Terminal One has been demolished and replaced by a much larger terminal, and a
further
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 larger terminal has been added, making three in total. The control tower has been moved from the south of the site, but perhaps the greatest change is in the number of railways, which has been doubled.
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 of two runways running from southwest to northeast, there are now two additional runways aligned northwest to southeast, allowing many more planes to land.
Overall
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, the
airport
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 is now much more flexible, and many more people can make use of it.

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