The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.

The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
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The maps represent the changes that occurred in Nature Museum from the
year
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2010 to 2013.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the east area covered with the garden was completely transformed into a variety of shops over the period.
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, the space for the Dinosaurs, Lobby and Ticket desk remained the same. In the
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between 2010 and 2013, there was no change in the entrance gate but the area covered by the Ocean Hall expanded to a bit more as compared to the
year
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2010.
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, the new amendmentation of insects and the ice age took place on the west side of the Museum.
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, there was no
such
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place for plants and trees in 2013.
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, the Human Origins Display was built in the north-west direction which was quite close to the Mammals.
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to the
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2013, there was no particular area for the shop and cafe in a south-west direction in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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