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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The graphs compare the proportion of various nutritional compounds contained in two different foods;
macaroni
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 and medium-baked
potato
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. In general, there is a larger percentage of
carbohydrates
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 and saturated fats in
macaroni
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 than in medium-baked potatoes.
In contrast
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, medium baked
potato
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 has a much higher amount of protein and glucose.
In particular
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,
macaroni
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 mainly consists of large amounts of
carbohydrates
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 and saturated fats.
Carbohydrates
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 take up slightly more than half, 52%,
while
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 a little less than a quarter is made up of saturated fats. The other nutrients show relatively lower proportions.
On the other hand
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, medium baked
potato
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 is mostly comprised of
carbohydrates
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 and protein. The amount of
carbohydrates
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 in the food is less than in
macaroni
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, but they still take up the greatest percentage of 35% in a medium-baked
potato
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. Interestingly,
this
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 dinner cereal has a large amount of protein 25%, which is very different from
macaroni
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. The other types of nutrients do not show significant figures in the pie chart.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words macaroni, potato, carbohydrates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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