The line graph and bar chart illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature in one area of East Africa.
A glance at the given bar chart and line graph depicts the average monthly rain and climate in a region of East Africa.
Overall
, it can be seen that rainfall
and temperature show an oscillation over the months and are related to each other. The precipitation is shown in millimetres
.
It is evident from the figure that from January to February, the average rainfall
of East Africa is less than 50 millimetres
and the condition within the period is above 22.5 degrees
and is increased till March to about 22.5 degrees
to receive good monsoon. Meanwhile, East Africa accounts for good rainfall
between March and May in which April (275 mm rain) is the wettest season of the year.
From the closed scrutiny of the data, the coolest months of the period are considered June to August as the climate falls to approximately less than 21 degrees
Celsius and has the lowest rainfall
of the time with less than 10 millimetres
similar to the beginning of the year. However
, the temperature gradually increases after a fall to an average of about 23.5 degrees
that results in stable precipitation in October and November with 150 millimetres
of rain followed by a stable fall of 1 degree in temperature till December (21.5 ° C) with rainfall
of 50 millimetres
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