You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice
Dear Joy,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and high spirit. I’m writing you
to let you know Change preposition
to you
finally
, I’ve decided to quite
Correct your spelling
quit
this
uninteresting job and find a new opportunity for me. Let me explain you
in detail.
As you already know, I never had Change preposition
to you
interest
in Add an article
an interest
finance
department, I always wanted to follow my passion for artistic Add an article
the finance
theater
. Change the spelling
theatre
However
, now it has been difficult for me to ignore my passion and work for
Change preposition
in
a
finance because my performance is getting affected by my Remove the article
apply
theater
practice.
Change the spelling
theatre
Nevertheless
, I’ll try my best to searchChange preposition
for a
a
opportunity in Change the article
an
acting
field; Add an article
the acting
due to
, my interest in theaters
. I believe that working for my passion will help me to be more productive.
Anyways, I need one Change the spelling
theatres
favor
from you. BecauseChange the spelling
favour
,
you’re already working in Remove the comma
apply
film
industry, do you have any Add an article
the film
refence
, where I can apply Correct your spelling
reference
for
to take part in Change preposition
apply
drama
or a short filmCorrect article usage
a drama
.
Please get back to me if you have any idea about Change the punctuation
?
this
, I’ll be glued to my phone awaiting your response.
Thank you,
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accuracy
Ensure your writing is free from spelling errors, such as 'quite' instead of 'quit'.
grammar
Pay attention to the correct usage of phrases and prepositions, e.g., 'due to' is generally used with a noun, while 'because' or 'since' could be more appropriate for your sentence.
range of vocabulary
Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more vividly and precisely.
accuracy
Remember to check for singular/plural consistency and use them appropriately throughout your letter.
structure
Your letter has a clear structure, with separate paragraphs for each point that you are discussing.
task response
You effectively communicated your reasons for leaving your current job and what you are looking for in a new job.
tone
The closing of your letter is polite and anticipates a response, which is appropriate for the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,