The chart gives information about the number of university graduates from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The number of university graduates can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007.

The chart gives information about the

number

of university

graduates

from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The

number

of university

graduates

can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007. The

number

of female

graduates

have

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a larger increase and a significantly higher

number

of

graduates

overall

. The

number

being

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was

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just below 100,000 in the

year

1992 with a sudden jump to above 100,000 in 1994,

then

decreasing back to 100,000 and remaining stagnant until 1999

where

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a steady incline

starts

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started

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to show. A similar trend can

also

be seen in the

number

of male

graduates

. After the

year

2001

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the

number

of female

graduates

rise

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rapidly,

while

the

number

of male

graduates

go

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up slower in comparison. The

number

of male

students

in 1998 is slightly more than in 1992. The

number

of male

graduates

also

sharply

increases

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to nearly 80,000 in the

year

1995 and slowly

decrease

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decreased

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back

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in 1998, until a more gradual growth after the

year

2001. The

year

in which the

students

graduated and the

number

of

students

graduated

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who graduated

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in both male and female

students

correlate, following very similar trends

overall

.

Furthermore

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the numbers for both

genderes

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genders

genres

peaked in the

year

2006.