The chart gives information about the number of university graduates from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The number of university graduates can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007.

The chart gives information about the number of university graduates from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The number of university graduates can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007.
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The chart gives information about the
number
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of university
graduates
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from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The
number
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of university
graduates
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can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007. The
number
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of female
graduates
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have
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a larger increase and a significantly higher
number
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of
graduates
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overall
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. The
number
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being
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just below 100,000 in the
year
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1992 with a sudden jump to above 100,000 in 1994,
then
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decreasing back to 100,000 and remaining stagnant until 1999
where
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when
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a steady incline
starts
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started
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to show. A similar trend can
also
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be seen in the
number
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of male
graduates
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. After the
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2001
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,2001
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the
number
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of female
graduates
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rise
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rose
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rapidly,
while
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the
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of male
graduates
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go
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up slower in comparison. The
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of male
students
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in 1998 is slightly more than in 1992. The
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of male
graduates
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also
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sharply
increases
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increased
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to nearly 80,000 in the
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1995 and slowly
decrease
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decreased
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back
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apply
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in 1998, until a more gradual growth after the
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2001. The
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in which the
students
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graduated and the
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of
students
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graduated
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who graduated
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in both male and female
students
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correlate, following very similar trends
overall
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.
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Furthermore
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,Furthermore
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the numbers for both
genderes
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genders
genres
peaked in the
year
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2006.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, graduates, year, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • information
  • number
  • university graduates
  • growing
  • gradually
  • 1992
  • 2007
  • overall increase
  • gradual growth
  • different rates
  • steady rise
  • significant jump
  • certain years
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