The chart gives information about the number of university graduates from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The number of university graduates can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007.

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of university

graduates

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from 1992 to 2007 in Canada. The

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of university

graduates

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can be seen growing gradually from 1992 - 2007. The

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of female

graduates

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have

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a larger increase and a significantly higher

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of

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overall

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. The

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being

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just below 100,000 in the

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1992 with a sudden jump to above 100,000 in 1994,

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decreasing back to 100,000 and remaining stagnant until 1999

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a steady incline

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to show. A similar trend can

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be seen in the

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of male

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. After the

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2001

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the

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of female

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rise

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rapidly,

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the

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of male

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go

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up slower in comparison. The

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of male

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in 1998 is slightly more than in 1992. The

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of male

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also

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sharply

increases

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to nearly 80,000 in the

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1995 and slowly

decrease

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decreased

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back

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in 1998, until a more gradual growth after the

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2001. The

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in which the

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graduated and the

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of

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graduated

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who graduated

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in both male and female

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correlate, following very similar trends

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Furthermore

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the numbers for both

genderes

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genders

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peaked in the

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2006.