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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You have decided to leave your current job due to some reason. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, tell him about the decision and mention the reason for it describe what you have learnt in the job request for a recommendation letter and experience letter

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Dear Sir, My name is Rohan Goyal
working
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and I work
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 as a Senior Analyst in
Finanace
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 team. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about my decision to resign from the company.
This
 is my first job after qualifying as
Chartered
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 Accountant and I have made many memories
while
 working here. I cannot imagine my routine without
this
 office. But as you are already aware
that
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my wife is a teacher in
government
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a government
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 school,
she
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and she
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 got a transfer to
school
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a school
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 in Punjab.
This
 is a compulsory procedure in their job.
Therefore
, I have to shift with her at her job location. As I
have
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joined the office at
initial
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the initial
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 stage of
career
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my career
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 whatever I am now is just because of
this
 organisation. There are tonnes of things that I have learnt
it
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here but few of them are like I have learnt
excel
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Excel
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 from
beginners
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 level to
advance
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 level, applicability of my financial
knowlegde
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knowledge
 in real business, and I am very
greatful
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grateful
 for your prime guidance in improving my presentation skills. I am really thankful for
such
 a wonderful journey here.
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 a great time working with you and other members of
this
 organisation. It would be really great if you could give a letter of recommendation for my contribution and dedication towards the firm
along with
 my experience letter. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Rohan Goyal
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