You have decided to leave your current job due to some reason. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, tell him about the decision and mention the reason for it describe what you have learnt in the job request for a recommendation letter and experience letter

#job #reason #manager #decision #learnt #request #recommendation

Dear Sir, My name is Rohan Goyal

working

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and I work

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as a Senior Analyst in

Finanace

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the financial

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team. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my decision to resign from the company.

This

is my first job after qualifying as

Chartered

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a Chartered

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Accountant and I have made many memories

while

working here. I cannot imagine my routine without

this

office. But as you are already aware

that

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my wife is a teacher in

government

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a government

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school,

she

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and she

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got a transfer to

school

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a school

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in Punjab.

This

is a compulsory procedure in their job.

Therefore

, I have to shift with her at her job location. As I

have

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joined the office at

initial

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stage of

career

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my career

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whatever I am now is just because of

this

organisation. There are tonnes of things that I have learnt

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here but few of them are like I have learnt

excel

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Excel

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from

beginners

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beginner

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level to

advance

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advanced

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level, applicability of my financial

knowlegde

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knowledge

in real business, and I am very

greatful

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grateful

for your prime guidance in improving my presentation skills. I am really thankful for

such

a wonderful journey here.

Its

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It's

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a great time working with you and other members of

this

organisation. It would be really great if you could give a letter of recommendation for my contribution and dedication towards the firm

along with

my experience letter. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Rohan Goyal

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8 paragraphs

225 words

6.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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