Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.
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the
number
of alcohol-related Use synonyms
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. The table shows that the greatest Use synonyms
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in 2002 was to be found in the Czech Republic, Germany and Austria and that each of these regions Use synonyms
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had by far the largest Linking Words
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of Use synonyms
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in 2005. The Czech Republic, with the greatest Use synonyms
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recorded the second highest Linking Words
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, namely 1.185 million.
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, the higher the alcohol-related mortality rate. It is interesting that in Canada, with the lowest level of Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite