Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.
There is a clear correlation between the
litres
of beer
consumed per capita and a
Correct article usage
the
number
of alcohol-related deaths
. The table shows that the greatest beer
consumption
in 2002 was to be found in the Czech Republic, Germany and Austria and that each of these regions also
had by far the largest number
of litres
of alcohol-related deaths
in 2005. The Czech Republic, with the greatest beer
consumption
per litre, namely over a hundred and thirty in 2002, also
experienced well over one million litres
of alcohol-related deaths
by 2005. The region with the second highest beer
consumption
was Germany, with nearly 107 litres
, and it also
recorded the second highest number
of alcohol-related deaths
, namely 1.185 million.
In all regions except ,Canada it can be seen that the higher beer
consumption
, the higher the alcohol-related mortality rate. It is interesting that in Canada, with the lowest level of beer
consumption
, at 86 per capita, the mortality rate was the high as in Ireland, namely 0.58 million, although
in the latter the consumption
level was high. ,Clearly
other health or economic factors must be involved. It is Add a comma
,Clearly
also
interesting to note that in each case the number
of female deaths
was significantly lower than that of males, which seems to be a reflection of the fact that in general far fewer women than men drink.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite