some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
moder
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modern
era, everything is based on technology. I completely
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disagree
with the statement and in the
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will discuss
that
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how machinery has made our life so
easier
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much easier
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. In
early
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1990's, everyone
loves
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their life without any kind of
luxuary equipments
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luxury equipment
. People used to go anywhere
via
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by
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cycle or
walk
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, which was very
time
and
enery
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energy
consuming.
Also
, the household ladies worked
by
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on
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their own,
for example
, washing
cloths
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clothes
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, coping,
mopping
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and mopping
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.
In addition
, smartphones were not available at that
time
. So, in that situation or in case of any
energency
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emergency
pupils would not be able to contact their family
memebers
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members
, relatives and friends for help.
On the other hand
,
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new generation
are
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well aware
regarding
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of
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the
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gadgets,
for instance
, smartphones. Today, with
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blink of
eye
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information can
send
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be sent
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to others.
Further
,
moterbikes
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motorbikes
and cars are
using
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used
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to
going
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anywhere without any
hussle
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hassle
hustle
. Technology is very
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helpful
for students like, during
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COVID 19
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pandemic
time
all schools and
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colleges
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were shut down. At that
time
,
machinary
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machinery
was there to help students.
Along with
that, students and teachers used
conputers
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computers
and laptops for online study and exams were conducted through media.
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Besides
, women are using washing machines and grinders to
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ease
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their work. In conclusion, using
the
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electronic gadgets
make
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everyone's life easier,
along with
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money,
time
and energy
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