You have learned from a news article that a real estate company is going to build a shopping centre near your home. However, you think that the shopping centre should not be built there. Write a letter to the city counsellor. In your letter, say how you have learned about the plan explain how it is going to negatively affect the residential area where you live say what you think the city council should do about it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.  Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the upcoming construction project in my residential

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and explain the negative impact on my city, so you can halt

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or move

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project into a commercial

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. Yesterday I read a recent article in the local newspaper about the shopping mall construction in my

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which is a good development for the citizens.

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, our

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is known for its beauty with lush green areas in it.

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all the houses are built

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taking care of the trees and plants.

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, if any big construction projects enter my town

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it loses all its greenery.

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, I suggest you transfer the shopping mall location from a residential

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to a commercial

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which is just twenty kilometres away from my town. It is beneficial for the shopping centre too, as most of the customers are coming from my city. I hope you will understand my situation and considering the negative impact will accept my plan to relocate it. Your Sincerely, Nikhil Kumar

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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184 words

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