The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The above pie chart and graphs depict the expected residing period for foreigners in the United
kingdom
and the possible causes for moving to the United Kingdom.
Capitalize word
Kingdom
Overall
, most people wish to stay in the country up
to two Change preposition
for up
years
and majority
Add an article
the majority
is
coming to the UK for work purposes.
38% of immigrants are visiting with the intention to work in the UK which is the highest percentage Correct subject-verb agreement
are
while
7% gave no reason for their move-in and another 7% suggested other means. Moreover
, from year 2000 to 2008
the population who wish to remain in the country for 4 or more Add a comma
,2008
years
remain steady at 150. However
, the crowd to reside
Wrong verb form
residing
more
than 4 Change preposition
for more
years
gradually increased from 150 to 250 in the years
of
2000 to 2004. Change preposition
apply
Thereafter
, that remained unchanged at 250 till 2008. In addition
, immigrant lodging length
of 2 to 4 Fix the agreement mistake
lengths
years
do not show a significant increase during
2000 to 2008. Change preposition
from
Furthermore
, 16% of people have visited the United Kingdom with their family.Submitted by prarthana1r on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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