You live near a record shop that sells music, movies, and books. Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to order some books, music and series. I live on the same street as your department store but on the opposite side of your showroom. I was planning to visit, unfortunately, I work from home from 8 am till 9 pm as same your opening hours of the shop.

Therefore

, I am writing the letter for my order.

To begin

with, I am looking for a book named "Rich Dad and Poor Dad" which is written by Robert T. Kiyosaki.

Also

, could you please send me the new music album of artist Sidhu Moose Wala if you have it? I am a die-hard fan of him.

Lastly

, I would like to store the new movie ,Avtar. I am sure you have all these collections as you always have all new entertainment sources.

Although

, I would like to know the price before purchasing the items.

Thus

, send me details of the prices of all and

also

, when I will receive my collections? If you need a cash deposit in advance please let me know. Have a nice day. Thanks, Gurpinder Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

187 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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