Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give you opinion.

While

some governments opine that economic

developments

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should be their priority, some people think it is not the only aspect that should be taken into consideration. In my opinion, only giving more attention to financial issues is not enough for the progress of a country. On the one hand, economic improvements play a crucial role in

growth

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the growth

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of nations for two main reasons. To commence with, in the lack of financial problems states can considerably develop the infrastructures of the country

such

as

transportation

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the transportation

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system.

In addition

, by

investment

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investing

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in different

market places

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and companies, individuals who

resident

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reside

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in the different parts of

country

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the country

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can employ easily with a decent salary.

Hence

, when the unemployment rate

reduce

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significantly, people's

life

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lives

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become prosperous and well-being appears in society.

On the other hand

, I believe that all categories influencing

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society'

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flourishing must be given equal attention.

Therefore

, several factors

such

as education, agriculture, public health, environment and other parts are as important as

economy

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economic

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priority.

Hence

, authorities

in addition

to

economy

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the economy

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should pay attention to other contributing factors

on

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to

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the inhabitant'

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inhabitant'

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inhabitants'

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happiness and welfare.

For instance

, Japan has concentrated on education in the

last

five decades and

for

this

reason

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nowadays, Japan is one of the leading countries in the world. In conclusion, many governments consider

the

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economic development as their primary issue,

whereas

, I am in agreement with some people who believe that

besides

the economy, countries need to simultaneously upgrade in education systems, tourism industry, agriculture industry, environment and other aspects