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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give you opinion.

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While
 some governments opine that economic
developments
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development
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 should be their priority, some people think it is not the only aspect that should be taken into consideration. In my opinion, only giving more attention to financial issues is not enough for the progress of a country. On the one hand, economic improvements play a crucial role in
growth
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the growth
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 of nations for two main reasons. To commence with, in the lack of financial problems states can considerably develop the infrastructures of the country
such
 as
transportation
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the transportation
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 system.
In addition
, by
investment
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investing
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 in different
market places
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marketplaces
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 and companies, individuals who
resident
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reside
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 in the different parts of
country
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the country
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 can employ easily with a decent salary.
Hence
, when the unemployment rate
reduce
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 significantly, people's
life
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lives
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 become prosperous and well-being appears in society.
On the other hand
, I believe that all categories influencing
on
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society'
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society's
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 flourishing must be given equal attention.
Therefore
, several factors
such
 as education, agriculture, public health, environment and other parts are as important as
economy
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economic
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 priority.
Hence
, authorities
in addition
 to
economy
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the economy
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 should pay attention to other contributing factors
on
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the inhabitant'
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inhabitant'
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inhabitants'
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 happiness and welfare.
For instance
, Japan has concentrated on education in the
last
 five decades and
for
this
reason
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 nowadays, Japan is one of the leading countries in the world. In conclusion, many governments consider
the
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economic development as their primary issue,
whereas
, I am in agreement with some people who believe that
besides
 the economy, countries need to simultaneously upgrade in education systems, tourism industry, agriculture industry, environment and other aspects
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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