Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give you opinion.

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some governments opine that economic

developments

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should be their priority, some people think it is not the only aspect that should be taken into consideration. In my opinion, only giving more attention to financial issues is not enough for the progress of a country. On the one hand, economic improvements play a crucial role in

growth

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of nations for two main reasons. To commence with, in the lack of financial problems states can considerably develop the infrastructures of the country

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as

transportation

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the transportation

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system.

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, by

investment

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in different

market places

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and companies, individuals who

resident

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reside

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in the different parts of

country

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the country

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can employ easily with a decent salary.

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, when the unemployment rate

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significantly, people's

life

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lives

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become prosperous and well-being appears in society.

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, I believe that all categories influencing

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society'

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flourishing must be given equal attention.

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, several factors

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as education, agriculture, public health, environment and other parts are as important as

economy

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economic

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priority.

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, authorities

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to

economy

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the economy

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should pay attention to other contributing factors

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to

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inhabitant'

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inhabitants'

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happiness and welfare.

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, Japan has concentrated on education in the

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five decades and

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this

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reason

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nowadays, Japan is one of the leading countries in the world. In conclusion, many governments consider

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economic development as their primary issue,

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, I am in agreement with some people who believe that

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the economy, countries need to simultaneously upgrade in education systems, tourism industry, agriculture industry, environment and other aspects