New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the present era, were latest technology and methods of sale and purchase are changing the lives of customers. I totally agree with the idea that
e- commerce
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e-commerce
has totally rerouted the method of trade. The lives of people before the internet and gadgets were completely different,
so
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and so
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were the ways of selling and purchasing.
For example
- if a person needs to buy a pair of pants,
then
he must go to a clothing store or a shop to make a purchase, without comparing the
price
with other sellers, who might be selling at a lower
price
, unless he visits them all to compare the
price
. With the arrival of
internet
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the internet
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and it being accessible on devices like
phone
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phones
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and
computer
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computers
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which makes it
easier
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is easier
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for
consumer
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consumers
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can view
product-line
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product lines
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on one platform.
This
in return helps
consumers
to locate and compare the product of their need with various
price
range
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ranges
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and
variety
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a variety
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of styles without getting out of the comfort of their house or office. Now the presence of technology can be seen everywhere, the kiosk machines at fast-food restaurants, airports,
railway
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and railway
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stations to name a few.
For instance
, if a person goes to a railway station where there are hundreds of people who need to purchase tickets, with few railway employees selling tickets, it will result in many
consumers
missing their trains. With the help of kiosk machines, the purchasing and selling of tickets become smooth and efficient as the
Userfriendly
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interface makes it easy for transactions.
To conclude
, it can be said that the introduction of robust technology and new methods of interaction
among
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buyer and seller has revolutionized the life of
consumers
as it is easy to use and is available in every corner of the world which
save
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saves
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both time and
efforts
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effort
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of
consumers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transforming
  • consumers
  • buying and selling
  • new technologies
  • revolutionized
  • consumer experience
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • range of options
  • mobile payment systems
  • transactions
  • challenges
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