The diagram shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.
The diagram illustrates how the
aluminium
cans
are being recycled in different steps.
Overall
, it is clear that
this
process is shaped by 7 main stages from putting cans
into specific recycle bins to collecting, recycling and reusing.
In the beginning, humans should put their used aluminium
cans
only in recycle bins of this
material. Thereafter
, the cans
inside the bin are collected by collecting vehicles, and they transfer them to related industrial companies for cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing. Following
this
, the compressed and cleaned cans
are put in a heating machine and then
it is melted.
In the next step, the melted aluminium
converts to rolling pages with 2.5mm to 6mm thick. This
process ends when they are used again for making aluminium
cans
and sent to companies like Pepsi and Coca-Cola to be reused. Therefore
, it shaped 74% of the canes of these companies in the UK.Submitted by mahanmxd on
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