Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a belief among some individuals that students pursuing degrees in medicine and engineering should serve their own
country
rather than moving abroad. Personally, I strongly believe that graduates should work in their respective places, but I will discuss both perspectives.
One argument is that students who receive their degrees should prioritize serving their own nation. It is believed that serving another country
will not contribute to the development of their home country
. For instance
, if someone studies MBBS in India but is interested in moving to the United States, they may find that there are already many highly qualified doctors in the US, while
India has a shortage of doctors. Therefore
, it is the responsibility of a responsible citizen to contribute to the growth and economy of their own country
.
On the other hand
, many people believe in democracy and the freedom to choose where to work. Working in another country
may lead to higher earnings, which can provide economic stability. For example
, a software employee in India may earn $5000 per month, while
someone with the same qualifications in the US could earn $10000. The majority of people are interested in earning money and advancing their careers.
In conclusion, I support the idea of people working in their own country
while
also
acknowledging the importance of earning money. Giving back to one's own country
can contribute to its development and growth.Submitted by sreyakaruturi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite