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Formal letter : You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this . Write a letter to the manager . In your letter: •Explain why you take time off work •Give details of the amount of time you need •Suggest how your work covered while you are away

#company #time #work #manager #•explain #•give #amount #•suggest
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter in regard to the leave plans that I am currently planning to avail. As you know very well, I have handled and led the team to complete a complex project with dedication and extra effort in a short span of time,
due to
 that I eventually developed severe throbbing back pain. Recently, I booked an appointment with the doctor for
this
 prolonged issue, and as per his suggestions, it is necessary for me to take at least one month of bed rest so that my bones can regain their original posture and forty nights of physiotherapy for my muscles to relieve tension for get a complete recovery.
Moreover
, I am a committed person toward my work and responsibilities, I have planned everything very well with a detailed spreadsheet document which contains the work distribution among team members. Even though I will be on complete rest, I can get in touch with the team periodically to get things done before they meet the deadline. And I can assure you that my absence will not affect any quality and product delivery of our project. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Chandralekha B
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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