Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are theadvantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?

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new
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different
toys
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. As every coin
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sides positive and negative in same ways buying too
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toys
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advantages and
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disadvantages
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, There are so many
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advantages
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buying so
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toys
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like, as some
parents
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buy their
children
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a large number of
toys
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to play have
kids
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get so much information about new things. As people
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buy more and more
toys
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many groups will get employment which is good for the
nation
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development. As
kids
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will play
from
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many
toys
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then
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they will get so much knowledge about different
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of things.
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parents
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parents
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will
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buy new
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to
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there
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their
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love
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one's
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then
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they will learn about different things.
secondly
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so many disadvantages they are spending
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amount on
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have
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some
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disadvantages
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like
children
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will play more
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compared
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to studying because
kids
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like to play more and more with
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.
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,
a
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apply
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Parents
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should
play books
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playbooks
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from
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money
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because that will help more in the growth of the nation.
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, if
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parents
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parents
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will buy toy
bike
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bikes
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for
there
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children
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then
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kid
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kids
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will play
from
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that
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them
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and
this
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will affect
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her
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study.
thirdly
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, School should encourage
kids
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to buy more
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book and spend
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on helping other people so that other people can get benefits from
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money
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but
children
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should buy books
from
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with
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there
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their
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pokcet
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pocket
money
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because that help them compare to
toys
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.
To conclude
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, the above information describes about advantages
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disadvantages.
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,
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me, in my opinion, spending large
money
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on
toys
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have
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has
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equally
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equal
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benfits
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benefits
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outcomes.
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