Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are theadvantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys?
Nowadays
its
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it is
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trend Change the article
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to
buying
new Wrong verb form
buy
as well as
different toys
. As every coin two
sides positive and negative in same ways buying too Add a missing verb
has two
much
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many
toys
have
advantages and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
disadvanatges
.
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disadvantages
firstly
, There are so many advanatges
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advantages
for
buying so Change preposition
to
much
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many
toys
like, as some parents
buy their children
a large number of toys
to play have kids
get so much information about new things. As people will
buy more and more Verb problem
apply
toys
many groups will get employment which is good for the nation
development. As Change noun form
nation's
kids
will play from
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with
toys
then
they will get so much knowledge about different kind
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kinds
For example
, if a
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parents
a parent
parents
will
buy new Verb problem
apply
toys
to
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for
there
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their
love
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loved
one's
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one
then
they will learn about different things.
secondly
, There are even
so many disadvantages they are spending Rephrase
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great
amount on Correct article usage
a great
toys
have
some Correct word choice
and have
disdavanatge
like Correct your spelling
disadvantages
disadvantage
children
will play more compare
to studying because Wrong verb form
compared
kids
like to play more and more with toys
. Thus
, a
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apply
Parents
should play books
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playbooks
from
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with
those
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that money
money
because that will help more in the growth of the nation. For example
, if a
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parents
a parent
parents
will buy toy bike
for Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
there
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their
children
then
kid
will play Fix the agreement mistake
kids
from
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with
that
and Correct pronoun usage
them
this
will affect on
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apply
her
study. Correct pronoun usage
their
thirdly
, School should encourage kids
to buy more and
book and spend Correct word choice
apply
money
on helping other people so that other people can get benefits from those
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that money
money
but children
should buy books from
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with
there
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their
pokcet
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pocket
money
because that help them compare to toys
.
To conclude
, the above information describes about advantages as well as
disadvantages. However
, according to
me, in my opinion, spending large money
on toys
have
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has
equally
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equal
benfits
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benefits
as well as
outcomes.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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