The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The display graph,
as well as
the chart, gives data about migration
to the UK. The graph describes how long immigrants in the years
2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK and the pie chart describes the reasons for migration
in 2008.
In 2 to 4 years
, in 2000, there were around 50 then
later by the year
2008, it was 100. In 4 or more years
, in the year
2000, there were around 150 but later by the year
2008 it was also
150. In 2 to 4 years
, in the year
2001, there were nearly 150 then
it increased by more than 250 in the year
2008. Reasons for migration
, in the year
2008 the data is in % immigrants. The main reason
was work with 38%, due to
study reason
32%, because of accompany/joining family there were 16% and other reason
and also
no reason
stated was 7%.
To conclude
, the above describes the length of stay of immigrants to the UK from 2000 to 2008 and the reason
for migration
, in 2008.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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