The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The first chart compares the purpose of using
energy
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in domestic in Australia. The second chart illustrates the percentage of greenhouse
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emissions
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released from the use of
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energy
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.
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it is clear that
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most Australians use
energy
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for heating and water heating, which contribute to a significant proportion of
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emissions
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from the consumption of
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. For the first chart, heating and water heating are the largest uses of
energy
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, at around 42% and 30%, respectively.
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, the rate of other appliances is approximately twice as high as that of refrigeration, at only 7%. Meanwhile, the figures for lighting and cooling used account for about 4% and 2% in that order. Regarding the second picture, we can see that the percentage of water heating makes up the highest of total
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emissions
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, at around 32%,
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that of other appliances was slightly lower, at about 28%.
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, the figures for heating and refrigeration releasing greenhouse
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emissions
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into the air are quite similar, at just over 14%.
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, cooling and lighting dispose of a few
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emissions
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in a total six of categories, at only 8% and 3% in the order given.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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