The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first chart compares the purpose of using
energy
in domestic in Australia. The second chart illustrates the percentage of greenhouse gas
emissions
released from the use of this
energy
.
Overall
, it is clear that
most Australians use energy
for heating and water heating, which contribute to a significant proportion of gas
emissions
from the consumption of energy
.
For the first chart, heating and water heating are the largest uses of energy
, at around 42% and 30%, respectively. Moreover
, the rate of other appliances is approximately twice as high as that of refrigeration, at only 7%. Meanwhile, the figures for lighting and cooling used account for about 4% and 2% in that order.
Regarding the second picture, we can see that the percentage of water heating makes up the highest of total gas
emissions
, at around 32%, whereas
that of other appliances was slightly lower, at about 28%. Besides
, the figures for heating and refrigeration releasing greenhouse gas
emissions
into the air are quite similar, at just over 14%. By contrast
, cooling and lighting dispose of a few gas
emissions
in a total six of categories, at only 8% and 3% in the order given.Submitted by huynhthienlam1805 on
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