Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Many

people

argue that getting to know genealogy is becoming more important in recent times,

while

others believe that

one

should concentrate on their current and coming generations. In

this

essay, I will analyze both views and present my opinion in conclusion. On the

one

hand, learning about ancestry is a way of feeling closer to

one

’s own family, which is linked in part to family traditions. And it is even more crucial for the next generation to carry on

such

valuable and unique traditions, that honoring where they come from.

Furthermore

, family trees can be a fascinating discussion topic for all members of the family to talk together whenever there is a family meeting.

For instance

,

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my grandparents faced difficulties

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up their children during the Vietnam War. That’s becoming our

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topic when all relatives gather for a traditional holiday feast.

Additionally

, figuring out family history

also

helps inform your health choice to prevent or treat diseases. Families that know that heart disease runs in their family can seek advice from doctors about how to avoid it.

On the other hand

, few

people

believe that our present is more critical than our past and

one

should devote his time and efforts to future generations rather than digging into the past. Proponents of

this

viewpoint say that researching ancestral trees might reveal some facts that can be embarrassing for our current generation.

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number of children will feel uncomfortable and distracted if they discover that

one

of their ancestors was not patriotic or committed several crimes.

Besides

, many

people

think that the past cannot be changed, so

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digging up family history, the present and future should be prioritized. In conclusion, the aforementioned provides plausible arguments in

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of both views.

However

, in my

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figuring out genealogical trees assists

people

to track

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their origin, achievement of their ancestors